Toriko 396 (Final Chapter)

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Hey, so this is the last chapter of Toriko everybody. If there’s some kind of bonus-thing where Shimabukuro releases extra chapters later, we’ll try to do those as well. Nothing like that’s announced so far though. He’s doing a one-shot set to come out in April 2017 and the last 2 volumes will come out on December 2nd and December 31st, that’s all the ads said. I wrote up a long essay at the end of this post about what t he series means to me and my overall thoughts and history with it. It’s pretty long, and I hope at least a few people bother to read it once you’ve read the chapter. I’ll stick the links up here first. Enjoy, everybody. It’s been a wild ride.

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My History with Toriko by Kewl0210

So, for those that aren’t aware, I’ve translated the entire series of Toriko. Every single chapter from 1 to 396. I’ve done them one a week almost every week (Except the occasional late chapter or break) for over 8 years now. The first chapter I translated was chapter 18 in September of 2008. I actually had done some of chapter 17, then chapter 18 came out and I saw it was really low on text, so I stopped 17 and did that one first. But since then I went back and did the earlier chapters and got those scanlated as well. It was the first series I ever translated outside of spoilers (I translated the end of Konjiki no Gash!! which I had worked on earlier, but didn’t translate until after I’d started Toriko).

So, I started out with this series because it felt really different and exciting to me at the time. Actually, when I first saw it I thought it looked weird and the art looked odd. But then I saw it was doing well in the Shonen Jump table of contents (The order of a series in the table of contents shows it’s approximate popularity), I decided to read through it. And I loved it. It had all these elements of science and adventure and it had this cool twist of motivation by food and stuff. It seemed like something that could be this huge vast series someday. At that time I really was into One Piece and a bunch of other manga. And I thought “If I’m the translator of this series and it becomes huge, I’ll be this big figure in the community! I’ll bring the series to the fans and that’ll be so cool! I’ll make this one my own!” And so I set about doing that. And man has it been a looooooong ride.

That might sound kinda exciting, but for the record, I don’t really think that mindset is the best one. That kind of undertaking was a bit insane if you think about it. I started this when I was 18 years old and I’m now finishing it when I’m 26. That’s something I obligated myself to do EVERY WEEK EVERY YEAR through the end of high school, all through college, and during the first few years of my career after college. All regardless of what might be happening that week any week.

Now, to be fair, when we first started out scanlation was in a way different place. People would post a translation to Mangahelpers.com and it would just be a public thing. Anybody could use it for a translation. Some volunteer could use public raws, clean it, then another volunteer could typeset it, then another volunteer could proofread/edit it and release it (They got rid of this policy after getting notices from the manga publishers). It was a really relaxed atmosphere at the time. Because of that, a lot of scanlations around this era aren’t all that good. Cleaners didn’t use the right tools and usually stuff looked blurry or had tons of dirt from the way Jump uses recycled paper and cheap ink to make the magazine easy to print. Rather than using various filters and techniques to make everything look marginally better (Still not as good as using volumes as your raw base). The first few chapters of Toriko were done by HS and Draagon. Later it was done by Sugooi Scans. A lot of these don’t have very good cleaning, have errors, have bad fonts, sloppy typesetting, that kinda thing. Early on anyhow, Sugooi got pretty good as they went on. Eventually, all these groups lost contact with me. I was still just publically posting chapters on Mangahelpers and hoping the scanlation would get done a few days later. But at a point, Sugooi Scans fell apart organization wise. This happens in scanlation a lot, and I’ve written about it before, but volunteer groups need a lot of motivation and group cohesion to stay afloat. Otherwise they die and often the series never gets finished.

It’s a lot of work to scanlate a manga on a regular basis. If you had to just do one chapter and say that was it, that’s not too bad. You run filters on 19 pages, you clear off all the bubbles, redraw the areas that weren’t in bubbles but had text on them, translate it, and typeset with fonts vaguely corresponding to the Japanese text. That’s mostly the whole process. But this is, for everyone involved, a hobby. And just like how lots of “wouldn’t it be fun if we did it all the time?” projects, people get busy. People get bored. People lose the thrill of when they were starting something new and exciting with endless possibilities and realize they’re just sorta coming back to it because it’s routine. Sometimes, this is rightly so. It’s kind of a second job. And the thing is even if 5 out of 6 members is dedicated and works hard and does their job on time, if the 1 other person doesn’t, then the whole thing can’t be finished. And realize, this is something you’re doing over the internet with strangers. Or at best, people you don’t know too personally (Maybe you talk over Skype or something sometimes). Then on top of that, no one can get paid. It’s not a career, it’s a hobby. Even in tight-knight groups who work on things like indie games or youtube channels, sometimes people quit because they just can’t sacrifice their time for passion projects. And because of ALLLL that, keeping a group together is hard. But I’ve talked about this all ad nauseum before. I feel it kinda bears repeating though.

So, basically, because we couldn’t get a group to consistently work on Toriko (and later Gintama) ourselves, we made Hi Wa Mata Noboru. Me and Rufi. Though really Rufi was mostly just doing his own thing and giving me some support from the sidelines. It was me and whoever else was cleaning/typesetting at the time. I think I was trying to do it all myself at first and just put recruitment pages up at the ends of chapters. In not too long, the Juin Jutsu Team guys joined us. And we worked with them for a good few years. They’re and Italian team that does a bunch of manga seires and some good guys. And they’re still around. We still keep in contact a little. Since then, the staff’s changed a lot. Swiftgold and Hish and Manhhai have helped a ton and been super dedicated. And I wanna take a second to thank everyone sooo so much for all they’ve worked.
Anyhow, basically at this point I didn’t want to lose this project I’d worked so hard on because I didn’t have a team, so I motivated myself to make sure not only to translate it EVERY WEEK, but to see to it that the other jobs got done. All while still in high school and not having tons of confidence in my translating ability. Back then my translations weren’t so good at deriving subtle meaning, plus my phrasing and ability to write clear, fluid English was way worse. Translating in an understandable and clear way is a skill that needs to be developed. Often you need to write in ways you don’t write/speak in real life, and familiarize yourself with different speech patterns in order to both make the story make sense, and to give characters different character voice. There’s a ton of pitfalls and it took me a while to get good at it. And I’m still trying to get better. Some translators out there are really amazing at it.

A lot of this worked well, though. Usually I only spent a few hours a week one day a week on Toriko. I didn’t have any stress of having to get it out in a few hours after I got early raws at this point in time. The world didn’t really work that way. I think people would get spoilers on Wednesdays, and then public raws would come out on Friday/Saturday. People would just use those. People rarely tried to work on series that were being consistently done by another group (Obviously, that’s changed since then.)

The thing to keep in mind with all this is, Toriko wasn’t my only project. Plus I was doing school and work and all kinds of life things. I honestly probably spent too much time working on manga/anime, but it was a way for me to escape and produce something I knew people would enjoy. Something I could think “I built this. I figured out how to do it and I got it done. People saw it and people enjoyed it. Thousands of people. And some even know who I am and thank me for it.” If you wanna know what other projects I’ve worked on, I was running Anime-Destiny doing the Konjiki no Gash Bell!! anime and later part of the Bakuman anime and the entire Kingdom anime. Later we did the Toriko anime AS we were doing the Toriko manga (Which had so many little changes I couldn’t just use old scripts for the most part. Also the old scripts weren’t translated/phrased as well, like I said). I also worked or am working on all these manga: 3-Gatsu no Lion, 81diver, Bakuman, Billy Bat, Doubutsu no Kuni, Enigma, Gintama, Hito Hitori Futari, Hunter X Hunter, Innocent, Innocent Rouge, Inumarudashi, Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure Part 7: Steel Ball Run, Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure Part 8: JoJolion, Kingdom, Kokou no Hito, Konjiki no Gash!! (the manga after the anime ended), Omoni Naitemasu, REAL, Ring, Spica, and Wolfsmund. And a bunch of One-shots. Now, realize a lot of these projects was only for a few months, or I would go off and on again every few months, or the anime would have a 6 month season and then it would end or something. But honestly, it was still a lot. And while I enjoyed it and I’m proud of all that, sometimes I still wonder about what I would do if I’d used that time for something else. Though I think I gained a whole lot from my life taking on all these challenges. (The reason I stopped doing HQ volume versions of Toriko on top of all that was because it just wasn’t fulfilling enough to spend the time and energy trying to organize it.)

What I’m saying is, getting all that done is hard. And through almost all of it, I was always doing Toriko every week. No matter what. I did it even when I went on the couple weeks I was on vacation in Japan in 2010 and 2015. And I was also leading the groups, making sure people did their jobs, making sure people filled in when they couldn’t work, finding backups when we couldn’t get raws, dealing with raw sources disappearing and needing to find new ones, etc. A lot of it was really fun and I loved sharing it with people, but a lot of it was really stressful too. At some point, I ended up having to going to sleep around 7-8PM so I could get up in the early mornings around 1-3 AM to work on Toriko so I could compete with other groups. Because the hard truth is, if yours series doesn’t come out first, way fewer people read it. And if people aren’t reading their work, then your staff loses motivation (Include me in that). And then it all falls apart even EASIER than usual. So I kept telling myself “I’ll work through his. Even though it’s hard and I’m losing sleep, if I work really hard I can overcome it and get this thing I care about done.” And to be honest, that was hard to do a lot of the time. Sometimes I got really frustrated. I had to work with people that didn’t communicate or weren’t cooperative if I wanted to get everything done and on schedule. Plus, often if I fell behind schedule I wouldn’t have time later to do it anyhow, so I HAD to get it done fast (And I still wanted it to be good quality). But, I made it to the end now, somehow or other. And I’m proud I stuck with it till the end. And now I can say I did the whole thing, about 400 chapters. Which is kinda surreal.

So, now that I finished talking about the process. I’ll talk about the actual story of Toriko a bit. I seriously loved this series the whole way through. Do I think it had flaws? Yes. But there was never a point where I wasn’t interested in what happened next. Not only that, it was always one of the most unpredictable series I’ve ever read. It never just lazily went into a cliché, it would find some twist to do the story a bit differently. And that’s something incredibly rare. I know some people didn’t like some parts and some people wish it stayed a series about going to exotic locations and getting a rare food item, but I really love the way it developed. I love the villains and the different kinds of problem that needed to be solved, I loved when it was fast and when it was slow, I loved when it seemed to setup a long arc but then made it all one chapter and I loved when it did a whole bunch of chapters to vastly expand on something that seemed simple.

To talk about flaws, I feel like Shimabukuro probably should’ve taken more time to develop the characters a lot. Toriko is very much made up of set-pieces. It’s not the type of manga to do super drawn-out battles where the one with the advantage switches 5 times. It’s usually one big thing that wins it for one side. But there were characters that were interesting but didn’t get all that much screentime. Later on, after the anime ended, there were places where it felt like he had all these plot ideas he needed to get through to get to the end. So rather than be slow and build up characters it sorta zipped through the events. Coco, Sunny, and Zebra become kinda side characters that helped Toriko rather than having their own goals and purposes like early on. I dunno if I’d call it “rushed” or just how Shimabukuro wanted to do it. There’s no way of knowing for sure what his original plan was. But one thing to keep in mind is Shimabukuro does a TON of foreshadowing. Joa is mentioned in chapter 80 or something and doesn’t become the main villain for another 100+ chapters. The Nitro were placed in really early and got developed into this whole alien species with a class system. I know SOME of these ideas were probably decided on after they were introduced. Like all the aspects of the appetite beasts was probably originally just a visual metaphor, rather than a super-being that died and was reborn as part of another being. Food Luck was probably originally just a hyperbolized version of how high-class chefs talk.

Some characters were kinda one-and-done. Don Slime was fun, but I didn’t feel much sympathy for him because we didn’t really get to know him. A bunch of characters weren’t much beyond a backstory and some kind of “proving themselves” thing. There’s like 10 villains that were introduced, only to be beaten offscreen or just disappear (Probably Shimabukuro couldn’t find anything useful for them to do. They may have just been there to let the readers know “This is a big organization way more than these 2 guys” even if the 2 guys were the only important ones). But there were definitely some really well done characters. Even some little ones. Like Yuda’s story I thought was great, despite his character not doing all that much outside that one battle. Toriko, Komatsu, Sunny, Coco, Zebra, Midora, Starjun, Ootake, and Acacia all had great story to them, I thought. They also had time to be introduced, developed, and make choices. For momentary purposes, Match, Takimaru, Aimaru, Brunch, Tommyrod, were all good characters despite not doing much for most of the series outside their “one big event”. That kinda frustrates me, but I guess a lot of the time it’s a matter of needing to do keep the plot going. Rin would’ve been nice to have been a bit more in the “main crew”. She had some good scenes beyond being the “love interest”, but they were all pretty short and didn’t involve much characterization beyond the Regal Mammoth arc. But some characters did have clear motivations, change, and grow. In addition to accomplishing things. And a lot of those really had great emotion. I’m sure I’m forgetting a ton here.

Of course, the world building was great. It had so much extreme stuff and it never felt to me like it ever got “routine”. It always found a way to take some aspect of society or nature and supercharge it, and then supercharge that. It never felt like it was “going through the motions”, it always felt creative. Course, at times it would’ve been nice if the world building were more involved. Like a lot of aspects got introduced then never really brought up again. Like Bar Heavy Lodge, or the wholesale market. Various things about the Neo organization. The Gourmet Prison had all this stuff introduced then it never came up again. The Shokurin Temple’s ideas got touched on SOME later on but mostly it was a straight power-up. The high-class chefs got brought up and developed pretty well. Sometimes when you think about these things they seem like “well maybe they got through everything interesting”. And it wasn’t meant as anything other than a set piece. A lot of things would’ve been cool if the set pieces had built on each other (And some did, obviously), but a lot of the time they were one-and-dones. I think the building of Food Luck and Appetite was done well. And how the Nitro worked and all that. Slow establishing of the past with Ichiryuu and Midora and co. worked ok, but at times it felt like we were on the outside looking in, rather than hearing about characters we cared about (Like Chichi, Kaka, and Jiji mostly felt like exposition machines. Didn’t really have character arcs).

So yeah, those are my general thoughts. I don’t really feel like going into any more detail than that. But I thoroughly enjoyed the series. I know some people felt it got too convoluted and plot-heavy towards the end, and that’s ok. It’s fine to have different opinions. I do wonder what Shimabukuro-sensei ends up doing next. He’ll probably do another series within a year or two. Last time he did Ring, which was a sports series. A heavy departure from Takeshi, which is a comedy/battle manga that’s generally pretty goofy and lighthearted.
I’ll think about maybe doing a volume scanlation of the last volume just as a going-away thing. Shimabukuro might have some last words about the series in it, and I’ll translate any of that if it’s there. And thank you all so much for supporting the series and sticking with it. Please buy the series in your language if it’s available and find any way to support the author. Even after all that hard work I talked about, Shimabukuro-sensei worked 10 times harder than I did, I’m sure. Thank you all for reading. I’m not planning on trying to start any more weekly series at the moment (I’m 26 and working a full time job. I think sticking to an irregular volume/chapter release is the more responsible thing at this point) I’m gonna see about maybe working (at least the beginning) on Seikimatsu Leader Den Takeshi as we wait for Shimabukuro’s next series.

42 thoughts on “Toriko 396 (Final Chapter)

    • Thanks for your work all this years. As I told you, I’ve donated 10 bucks for a goodbye beer (and I recommend that everyone that has enjoyed your work does the same!). The sun will rise again!

  1. This is such a great feat! Your dedication all these years is purely incredable, thank you (and all of your team members that worked on it at some point) very very much.
    I haven’t been reading toriko recently because I wanted to stack a bit of chapters before binging it, but I really love this series and I’m incredibly thankful for all of your effort in it.

    You’re honestly really incredibale and always pick the best of manga to translate.

  2. First of all, i want to say thank you for all of you guys!
    thanks for your hard work and your dedication for 8 years!

    been reading toriko since my junior high school, and now i’m working full time job.
    its fun waiting for you to translate it each week, reading it, and discuss it with friends later.

    thank you so much HWMN!!

  3. After reading all of this, I feel both sorry for bad stuff mentioned in the post and glad for having been a part of HWM, albeit quite modest.

  4. Thanks Kewl for the good few years we spent together working on this fabulous project…
    Toriko’s gotten a special place in my heart, and thanks to us, a lot of people in Italy had the opportunity to enjoy it.
    I think we did a great job, and I want to say thanks to you for your amazing translations.
    And of course, thanks to Shima-sense For those incredible eight years of Toriko.
    He filled my heart and my stomach till its contents.
    ITADAKIMASU.

  5. Thanks for the awesome work all these years. Great article too! I just got into translating a few months ago so it was interesting to see how the community was 8 years ago! Perfect end to a great series! Thanks again.

  6. it’s finally done….
    congratulation and thanks for all of your hard work!!!
    just curious, will you guys translate vol 3-9 for better version?
    since you did re-translate vol 2 after all….

  7. I’m Brazilian, my english is crap. But i’ve read your text regardless. There’s few people in the world who translated an entire series since the beginning and enjoyed it. You did a great job, to say the least. Toriko was a good ride. Many thanks!

  8. Hey could you guys put up a download link with ALL the Toriko chapters+volume bonuses in the link so we can download the entire series all at once?

  9. Holy crap HOW are you dividing ur time with all those projects u worked on and still working on combined with school and job and life??? Cotdamn my respect went 2 points up after reading all of this (and it was already way up) too bad we won’t be getting volumes 3-9 re released i like many others probably wanted to reread everything again. I didnt know until now u quitted on those plans. Thanks for everything and ur years of dedication u guys are seriously something else!

  10. Man i always am baffled to think that i have been stalking your work for more than 6 years, time is quite the surreal thing, i agree with all you said, however reading the final chapter i am left with this feeling of wanting to read an space arc in which we travel to the farthest lands.

    Talking about series you have done, would you be interested on giving a go to Vector Ball the new series by Makoto Raiku? one guy has been working on the volume chapters but since it is a one person team it doesn’t seem to be moving too fast.

  11. Hey, let me say thank you so much for all your hard work over all these years. Toriko has been without a doubt the series I most looked forward to reading each week for the past few years, and I would always come to this website to download it each week. I had an inkling of the hard work you put in from your blog posts, but reading your article really put it into perspective of how much you dedicated to releasing this series. Thank you for persevering over the years and not being discouraged by other groups scanlating the same series. You have no doubt had a huge influence on myself and many thousands of others who have followed the toriko manga. Gokurousama deshita. It’s been a wild ride. I look forward to reading Seikimatsu Leader Den Takeshi and continuing to follow the other series you put out.

  12. Thanks kewl and the hiwamatanoboru team. Great article by the way, i’ve been following your translations for years and I wanted to make a heartfelt THANK YOU for all your hardwork and dedication to this wonderful series.

  13. Thank you so MUCH for your hardwork and dedication on Toriko. You really made us happy with translating it. Now get some rest and sleep 🙂

  14. Thank you very much for your hard work on this series. I enjoyed this series so much and I wouldn’t have if not for your translation efforts despite the ups and downs that were occurring. Take care and good luck in your future endeavors, wherever you are / whomever you are.

  15. Wow, that was a long read, thank you very much for all your hard work! I always waited for your version before i read every single chapter, so thank you for all your hard work! Plus, i have the entire manga in your version(which im pretty proud to say ;))

  16. Hi Kewl, how are you doing bro?

    I wanted to say THANKS A LOT for all you’ve done.

    Toriko really has a special place in my heart…

    It had the potential to be one of the best shounen mangas EVER, but sadly even during the Cooking Festival it was rushed…

    I remember the times when each week i was waiting patiently for Toriko to come… The last 100 chapters or so have been a mess…

    I’ll be super happy if you translate Leader Takeshi.

    Thanks again.

  17. Hey Kewl

    It was great to read your speech 🙂

    Honestly, I don’t see how to express my gratitude towards your work; reading Toriko was great all these years (I remember starting with the Surprise Apple chapter, and since then I have LOVED this series), even when there were other scanlators I always kept reading your version, because the attention to the details you put in your series is top 🙂

    Many years have passed, and it has been great expending my free time reading what you bring.

    I will expect any other serie you bring, because I know you will scanlate it with the same professionalism you have us used to.

    Greetings, and congratulations on Completed Scanlating!

  18. I haven’t read a single chapter of Toriko, but I stumbled across the above post while looking for your scanlations of another series, and felt like I had to say this: that is some amazing work! Your brand of dedication is incredibly rare in the world, never mind the ever-shaky world of scanlation. Cheers on a job well done, and best of luck in your future endeavours, scanlation-related and otherwise!

  19. Thanks for all the hard work! I can’t believe it’s been 8 years for you. I was once so into toriko, and honestly to me the last part was “rushed” and i want to see more. But it doesnt stop me from enjoying your work. Toriko is one of the few series i can actually reread.

    I’ve donated $10. Please grab a beer and celebrate a job well done. I look forward to reading gintama every week, as well!

  20. Kewl you are amazing! Thank you so much for translating my favorite manga! If I had any money I would’ve donated before but hopefully soon I will. You made these last 6 years great for me and i’m sure a lot more people, and your dedication is mindboggling! Thanks so much!

  21. Thank you for all these years. Having a Toriko release every week always gives me a smile; weekly release till it ends is definitely not easy, really happy that HWMN is the group that picked up Toriko. Thank you very much.

  22. i don’t read toriko, but i just wanted to thank you so much for all of your work on all of these series. i really admire your perseverance and drive in seeing this to the end. it is truly awe-inspiring and we are so blessed to have you and the rest of the team. i wish you the best in whatever future steps you decide to take as a scanlator. thank you so much and i hope all of you can get a lot of much-needed rest!!

  23. Thank you Kewl, you’re a hero. I love this series and would never have enjoyed it as much as I did if not for the sacrifices of people like you.

  24. Pingback: Seikimatsu Leader Den Takeshi! Ch. 1 | Hi Wa Mata Noboru

  25. Thank you very much for your effort. Really appreciate on how you spare your time and your hard work to deliver one of my all-time favorite manga. Thank you.

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